vortexman
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Post by vortexman on Oct 24, 2010 23:29:18 GMT
Flavour text available on request..However does this work from a mathematical standpoint?
Deep in the far reaches of space you will find the Vetrall depending on who you ask they range from large batlike creatures to ancient birdlike creatures however one thing is always the same when the Vetrall come nobody is safe.For the Vetrall cannot be reasoned with or bribed they are creatures of instinct.Following the lights of ships to their destinations and feasting on the population.A lone Vetrall is bad enough however Vetrall are known to emit a hideous call which alerts all the nearby Vetrall of the food.Planets "colonised" by the Vetrall become breeding grounds for more Vetrall making their elimination almost impossible.
(I'm not fond of the name and the flavour text sounds odd to me)
Attributes: Awareness 4 Coordination 4 Ingenuity 2 Presence 3 Resolve 3 Strength 4
Traits 4 Alien Alien appearance(major) Flight(Major) Natural weapons (Minor) Fear Factor
Skills Athletics 4 Fighting 4 Survival 3 Subterfuge 4
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misterharry
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Post by misterharry on Oct 25, 2010 7:43:52 GMT
What is it - some sort of bird creature? Stats look OK to me. The only thing I'd say is that the claws (or whatever the natural weapon actually is) are probably quite nasty, with a good chance to hit (4's on both Coordination and Fighting) and damage of 4 Strength plus 2. If they're an aggressive species, I wouldn't want to meet a gang of them! Any chance of posting the description text?
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vortexman
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Post by vortexman on Oct 25, 2010 13:21:05 GMT
I'll find my notes and edit the original post.The PC's are only likely to encounter the one but they're certainly not to be taken lightly.
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misterharry
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Post by misterharry on Oct 25, 2010 20:35:41 GMT
One suggestion having read your scenario outline for this creature: I wonder whether giving it a level or two of Fear Factor would work better than Screamer? I think Screamer is primarily intended to be a defensive trait (e.g. a companion screams on seeing a monster), whereas Fear Factor would give the creature an active ability to cause fear with its shriek. Just a thought.
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vortexman
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Post by vortexman on Oct 25, 2010 21:02:52 GMT
So I should replace screamer with fear factor then? Admittedly I only gave it screamer for thematic reasons.Fear factor sounds good.Thanks
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